Monday, December 05, 2005

Winter (Haiku)

shivering winds
swirl unscarfed snowflakes
to cool the breath

Inspired to write a haiku by J. Andrew

4 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love it! You really should keep doing this --- it's unbelievably cold tonight and this fits perfectly.
jal
(do more!)

Carol said...

Yes, I want to. Also I would like to try out some of the other forms, as well. I have only used them abit. I was in the Blueline Poetry forum for awhile and was introduced to a few of the styles.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I've never heard of the "Blueline" forum, is that a website?
jal

Carol said...

J. Andrew,
You would love it. There used to be a haiku section.
http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/index.php