Sunday, April 17, 2005

Half Crazy

Since she came
into my night
I have lifted up
an existance
of everlasting
and embraced the
lightness of being

This is my reality now
this is me

this poem was inspired while listening to Leonard Cohen's Suzanne


moira said...

Cohen is an amazing artist.

Carol said...

So now I understand you and your husband when you both describe your poetry as "generally bad" or "drivel."
Using my poem as an intro to Cohen is a disturbing experience.

moira said...

Well, I like it. It was very well done. Your poetry often surprises me.

Carol said...

You are a sweetheart. Thanks.