Saturday, April 29, 2006

A Sense of Her

Hidden inside a cotton gift bag
touch describes her

tears flow down a smooth cheek
honesty opens a crevice in her thoughts
and I feel coolness
and silkiness

Then I open the drawstring
and she falls silently before me
recovering herself
before I really know



Bautiful poem.

Poetry by Kai said...


Aurora said...

Carol, I love this one!

Barbara said...

This is beautiful Carol!

Carol said...

Thank you for your kind comments.

Hope you enjoyed the 2006 National Poetry Month celebrations here at A Revision!

Pearl said...

I like the accuracy of the image of emotions peaking out before being brushed away in what I see as this goodbye gift giving.

Carol said...

Hi Pearl,
It is always interesting to read other people's interpretations!

Jon Cox said...

Great poem!

Carol said...

Thanks Jon,
Nice to meet you.