Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Cranking It Out

Ever since forever,
I said to the jumping jack,
dangling from a box
in the middle of a stage,
"Don't be a showoff!

Minimize your words, s.o.
refrain those sunny aspirations
and if
you do well
and are well
Keep it yourself, sunbeams can't play forever!"

Now listen to the response to the person in the back row
"When the melody ends, I will jump and be glad for I have done well. I am well"


Pat Paulk said...

Well, you certainly are doing that. These re fantastic gems you're cranking out!!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice!

aurora said...

Excellent layers to this one, Carol. The open-endedness is very clever.

Artpuppy said...

Did you write this? Wonderful!