Monday, February 12, 2007

Pretty Women Chapter 3.4

Mr. Charleswood was wheeled in and the camera quickly zoomed to his pale, grim face. His eyes misted as he peered into the lens; the basement audience hushed. With the appearance of the mahogany casket, Marie automatically stood up. Someone giggled and the embarrassed hair- stylist sat down.
Jolene fidgeted to see the screen, just barely catching a glimpse of the wheeled old man sneering as he turned from the camera.

A handsome man in his mid-thirties walked slowly to the podium which stood behind the closed coffin.
A women next to Jolene commented to her companion that this was Glynnis' therapist while the other corrected her to say that he was her publicist. Jolene could only see half of the man's face as he announced to the crowd, " She was the epitomy of womanhood." His silky voice echoed over the heads in the hall.

4 comments:

Barbara said...

Hmmm, I'm wondering what the epitomy of womanhood is like.

Imran said...

Happy Valentine's Day pretty lady!

Aurora said...

Yeah, just what is the epitome of womanhood? :)

Keep these segments coming, Carol. I love this stuff.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

keep it going --- I'm waiting. :)