Monday, December 05, 2005

Winter (Haiku)

shivering winds
swirl unscarfed snowflakes
to cool the breath

Inspired to write a haiku by J. Andrew

4 comments:

  1. I love it! You really should keep doing this --- it's unbelievably cold tonight and this fits perfectly.
    jal
    (do more!)

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  2. Yes, I want to. Also I would like to try out some of the other forms, as well. I have only used them abit. I was in the Blueline Poetry forum for awhile and was introduced to a few of the styles.

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  3. I've never heard of the "Blueline" forum, is that a website?
    jal

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  4. J. Andrew,
    You would love it. There used to be a haiku section.
    http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/index.php

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